Editing Pieces After The Rough Cut

Feedback From Our Rough Cut

We collected feedback from our target audience on our rough cut. This will enable us to make the relevant changes to our rough cut so that it progresses and becomes more enjoyable for the target audience by the end of our final cut.

Rough Cut

Corrections

After editing the filming that we had I realised that some shots weren't up to scratch. This was either down to bad camera work or lighting. I have highlighted the shots below to show which shots we decided to re-do.

Location

A lot of the music videos proffessionalism depends on the locations it is shot at. For this reason we spent a long time planning where we were going to film. We have decided that we use the following locations:

Stefs House - The beginning where Rory is waiting for his girlfriend to come home.

Range Rover - The first viewing that we realise Stef is cheating on her boyfriend.

Hilton Hotel - The scenes that prove that Stef is having an affair. Rory then realises what is happening in the hotel room when he arrives.

New Barn Park - The scenes that were shot in the park with the lake in the background.

Cast

Rory Phelan

We have used Rory as our main character due to the fact that he works as a Hollister model and does performing arts. This kind of performer makes the music video look more professional.

Stef Jansen

We used Stef because we needed a female character with acting experience. Stef also does performing arts so we thought she would be a good performer to use.

Henry Goldsmith

We used Henry because he is stefs boyfriend. This way stef would be able to perform the 'cheating' storyline with him.

Animatic

Pieces Anamatic from Stefaceylauren on Vimeo.